I did a thing, but the more I look at it the less I actually like it idk. Anyway heres the thing, I hope you guys like it more than me rn heavy sigh
Okay here it is cute anon here is the link
omg who is this u are makin me blush come here u
i will post a link to it like on a document sharing website or something just because i sort of worry someone is gonna steal it
even though thats rly dumb
plus that would be a long-ass post it’s like 64 pages long do u really even want to read that?
laughs okay keep an eye out within the next few minutes for a link cutie patoot anon
ITS SO CUTE
I know right? ; v ; We named him Hy-Vee after the name of the store.
So I was at work today I work at a grocery store and then I went outside to get carts and on the wall under an overhang of the roof there was this cool bat
He was such a lil cutie he was snoozing in the shade and my guess was that since it was storming last night, he flew in under the roof to get shelter and then stayed there till morning, and was sleeping there cause it was too bright and hot to do anything today. I checked up on him periodically during the day but all he did was sleep peacefully u v u
I’m a bit handicapped here in trying to evaluate the story because I’ve only seen the first Harry Potter film and read only part of the first book in the series.
So, yes, I’ve heard of some of the situations, places and characters in the Potter series, like muggles (oddly, muggles was street slang for marijuana joints back in the 50s and before), but squibs I’m not familiar with. Maybe it’s something you made up. I don’t know.
But in the long run I don’t think it matters that much because your story has a life of its own. Anne is an inherently interesting character, one who couldn’t get into Hogwarts. A loser, so to speak. Yet her dramatic need to get there provides an excellent story arc, perhaps even on a par with the fabulous doings at Hogwarts itself.
The Treatment was well done, too, and prompted me to want to read the screenplay, which is what it should do.
Very good work all along.
Final Grade: A